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Aethix 31st May 2011, 12:06 AM Edit Delete
I am now in love with inkscape. Smooth lines, hooray!

I think I may have been unconsciously influence by Umineko when drawing the third panel. Jack's knife-licking face reminds me of Beatrice's trollface.


view 31st May 2011, 11:04 PM Edit Delete Reply
It's nice to see your improvement continue! Your lines are much smoother, now. I've never used Inkscape, maybe I should look at it.

One thing you may want to avoid is reusing poses. It makes the characters feel stiff! Changing the center of mass and the curve of the spine can give you a lot of really great body language. For example, in the last panel, the girl could be leaning away.

I understand you have a lot of thoughts on your art already on your plate, it's just something that I feel is an instant level up... :)
Aethix 31st May 2011, 11:13 PM Edit Delete Reply
@view: Thanks, that's good advice. It's tough to know where to focus artistic effort, and comments like yours really help.
ThornsInOurSide 7th Jun 2011, 8:04 PM Edit Delete Reply
He also likes girl-flavored knives!
Kai Faydale 18th Aug 2011, 4:31 PM Edit Delete Reply
Kai Faydale
I downloaded inkscape a little while back and really need to try it out it looks good here.
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