It's nice to see your improvement continue! Your lines are much smoother, now. I've never used Inkscape, maybe I should look at it.
One thing you may want to avoid is reusing poses. It makes the characters feel stiff! Changing the center of mass and the curve of the spine can give you a lot of really great body language. For example, in the last panel, the girl could be leaning away.
I understand you have a lot of thoughts on your art already on your plate, it's just something that I feel is an instant level up... :)
One thing you may want to avoid is reusing poses. It makes the characters feel stiff! Changing the center of mass and the curve of the spine can give you a lot of really great body language. For example, in the last panel, the girl could be leaning away.
I understand you have a lot of thoughts on your art already on your plate, it's just something that I feel is an instant level up... :)